John Brown of Osawatomie spake on his dying day: |
The portion of the poem printed here is the revised version as it appears in the Cambridge and Riverside editions of Whittier's poems. The original version drew severe criticism from William Lloyd Garrison in his Liberator, January 13, 1860, where it was reprinted. The second line of the third stanza read: "Without the rash and bloody hand, within the loving heart." Whether the change came from Garrison's criticism or not, the later reading was a decided improvement and softened the language as well. |